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I'm pretty sure that Pam talking in her sleep is the most adorable thing ever conceived. Let me check... yep. It is. I was right. :)

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He fidgeted oddly in her arms, "Uh....no...see...you gotta take the socks off first...then...you know. That's when this," he said gesturing between them, "Is fine."

That line just killed me! So funny! Jim's irrational fear of Pam's socks--though they are a little odd, I'll admit--might be the funniest thing I've read in a while. And Pam's solution to the problem? Well, that's just the extra icing on the cake! :) 

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bahahaha! Oh wow, this was just such an adorkable little snippet here, lovefool! It especially resonated with me because I wrote a story not long ago where Jim had "Back in Black" as his ring tone on his cell phone. So, as I read this, I just kept thinking, "Oh yeah, it's totally plausible that he'd be humming that tune. After all, he hears it every time Pam calls his phone." 

(Yeah, see, I'm enough of a narcissist to believe that everyone knows what I'm thinking when they're writing their own stories! :P) 

Anyway, just a fantastic job here. Bravo! 

*applause* BRA-VO!!! Very, VERY nicely done! :)

Author's Response: *Bows*  Thanks for talking me off the ledge :)

Heh... I love that of all the things on Andy's list, "shopping" would appeal the most to Kelly. So true. 

Nicely done! 

Ten bucks says Kelly calls Andy "Ryan" while they make out. :P

Very funny stuff! Nice job! 

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BAHAHAHAHAHAAA!! This is beyond a sombrero snort! Brilliant! 

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I've got a topic for Jim's next show... "Stories by Swiff: Excellent or just plain 'ol fantastic?" I'm sure there would be a ton of callers for that one. :)

This story just keeps getting better and better. You've really hit your stride with this one, and I couldn't be happier! 

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SWIFFER!! This was BRILLIANT!!! Really, you just keep on amazing me with every new chapter! And now, let's move on to a new segment in our show, entitled, "Things Mose Loved About This Chapter." 

-That Andy's mentoring skills are gleaned from Mastercard commercials.

-That Jim is both confident enough to fight for Pam at this early stage, yet still be kind of awkward and dorky around her off-air.

-That mysteriously locked supply closet. What could be in there? My guess is that nobody should try and find out. The results could be too horrifying to comprehend, and it'd be like that scene in Raiders of the Lost Ark, when everyone's faces melt off. 

-Most of all, I loved, loved, LOVED Jim's sneaky way of showing Pam that she had the power within her all along! I mean, who knew that ten bucks to Andy would be akin to Dorothy's ruby slippers, or Dumbo's magic feather?

Again...BRILLIANT chapter. Best so far, and that's saying something, my friend! 

WHOO HOO! Love the new direction you decided to go with this! Todd Packer as a relationship expert? Genius. 

Just a fantastic chapter, and I think this new radio show will win in its demographics! :) Excellent work, as usual!

YAY! I am definitely setting my MTT preset to this station!

(Oh, was that the cheesiest thing ever??? :P)

I cannot wait to see what you do with this! Viva la Swifferina! And viva la AU stories! 

So I finally got around to leaving you a proper review for this. Can I just say how glad I am that you've decided to post a few things over here? I'm not one to throw stones, but this place kicks ffnet's trash all the way down the street and around the corner! 

This story is as funny as I remember it the first time I read it. You have such a knack for dialogue and observation. Just fantastic stuff all the way around.