Penname: Mr Bill Real name: William Murphy
Member Since: April 28, 2007

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Cancer scare by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 5
Summary: Pam doesn't do well when she doesn't get her sleep. For the "birthday month!" series, even though I haven't figured out what I'm doing wrong in order to add it.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Kevin, Other
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 899 Read Count: 2149 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: May 01, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay...you got me!   Well done. 

Author's Response: Ha! I wasn't really trying to pull a fast one this time, so I'm doubly glad it caught you by surprise! Thanks!

Summary: Characters from my previous stories reflect on the birth of Cecelia Halpert.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Other, Pam, Roy, Ryan, Toby
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2665 Read Count: 2466 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: May 01, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: We're all back....

I liked this very much.  An inventive and novel approach, and a chance to think back on fond memories. 

The Big 3-0 by LoveFool Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 11
Summary: Jim and Pam celebrate Jim's 30th birthday, six months after baby Cece arrives.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Drabble, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Married, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1406 Read Count: 3375 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: May 01, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Big 3-0

Snappy repartee and 'Birthday Sex'...a great combo and so much fun!

Summary: A little birthday gift for someone very special
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Kids/Family
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2610 Read Count: 2434 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2010 Updated: May 02, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh that was fun.   As much as we know that he loves Italian food, I'm sure Daddy Jim was just as happy (if not more so) to spend his special day with his two verrrry special girls! 

Author's Response: :) Thanks! So glad you liked it Mr. Bill, I enjoyed writing it :) And of course...had to throw in his Italian food ;)

Summary:

Pam reflects on the events that take place on Michael's Birthday during Season 2.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Kevin, Michael
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 657 Read Count: 1535 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2010 Updated: May 02, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bees...so much fun to go back and relive those special moments between Jim and Pam...oh, and Michael.   Nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks Mr. Bill!  I had fun imagining I was walking around Rite Aid with Jim ;-)

Summary: A naughty little birthday present for Nan Reg!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Wet Pam/Jim, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4028 Read Count: 7967 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2010 Updated: May 02, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: They Take the Cake

Oh...oh so naughty...but oh so nice!

Author's Response: Thank you, Mr. Bill!

Summary: Jim and Pam prepare for Cece's third birthday party.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Kids/Family
Warnings: None
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1315 Read Count: 1867 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2010 Updated: May 02, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love is...Jell-O and Ice Cream

I could just picture all of it in my mind as I read...you brought the words to life.  So very sweet.  

Author's Response: What a lovely review. Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me what you thought. BA :)

Summary: Jim takes Pam to see the Pacific for her birthday
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Kids/Family, Married, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2601 Read Count: 3538 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2010 Updated: May 02, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved your description of little Cece discovering the sand and the water...such a great memory for Jim and Pam. 

 And this was fun, too:

"The only artistic piece I’ve created (with Pam’s help, of course) is now soundly asleep—our flesh and blood, born out of love so profound that transcended all forms of contraception.


And that’s the best art of all the other arts."



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Summary:

Cecelia sleeps in.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 582 Read Count: 3653 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2010 Updated: May 02, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Sunshine

Oh...the "documentary" line...somehow slyly clever....I laughed out loud.  Very nice!

S-E-A-M by nomadshan Rated: T [Reviews - 17] 13
Summary: A kiss amid chaos.
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1595 Read Count: 3303 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2010 Updated: May 03, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: s-e-a-m

Quite the novel take on an iconic photograph...so very romantic and so verrrry well done!



Author's Response: Thanks, Mr Bill!

Summary: Past Featured Story"My daughter, the birth of my daughter, gave me life." - Johnny Depp. (And a bit of grief mixed in as well.) Cecelia Halpert, through her father's eyes.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam
Genres: Childhood, Drama, Fluff, Humor, Kids/Family, Married
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14790 Read Count: 48096 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2010 Updated: July 05, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Cecelia Halpert, Age 1

A broad smile crept across my face as Cece "ran away" down to the end of the driveway...haven't we all done almost the very same thing.  Such a perfect moment between Jim and his daughter!

Legacy by jazzfan Rated: T [Reviews - 14] 9
Summary: Jim and Pam celebrate a birthday. Written for the Celebrate NanReg's Birthday Fan Fic Bash (okay, I apologise, it's a little late)
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama, Holiday, Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3514 Read Count: 2610 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2010 Updated: May 26, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Legacy

Jazzfan...perfectly heartfelt and beautifully, beautifully done! 

Author's Response: Thanks Mr. Bill.

Summary: Past Featured StoryHe wakes up with a jackhammer in his head, cotton in his mouth and a swirling vortex of something awful in his stomach. Set just after "Diwali."
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, In Stamford
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4727 Read Count: 9232 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2010 Updated: July 01, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Now

That was pretty much perfect...please update soon! 

Author's Response: Thanks, Mr. Bill! I've got the next chapter just about ready to go. I hope you like that one too.

when you begin by kells8995 Rated: MA [Reviews - 15] 5
Summary:

He thinks back to the night before. Their first night together, and despite a few glasses of wine with dinner he remembers everything. Well…obviously that, but the little details too.

 

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 851 Read Count: 3060 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2010 Updated: June 29, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"His fingers trace a path....from the nape of her neck, slowly down her back to the swell of her bottom.  She's warm, and when he touches her she sighs quietly in her sleep.  He's still learning the little nuances about her, but it sounds like a happy sigh.  She sounds...yeah.  Happy."

I'm with jazzfan on this one...sweet and deliciously intimate!   Thanks kells

 

Summary: I feel like, in order to truly be welcomed into the fold of MTT writers, one must present a first date story. This is mine.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24598 Read Count: 55661 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2010 Updated: October 17, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Why can't we give love one more chance?

"She raises an eyebrow, loving that they’re allowed to be playful again. There are things to be said between them, serious moments that will be decidedly less blushy, that will give way to hearts racing in a different way, but that will happen in its time, and for right now she wants to enjoy this…sparkle…that’s happening." 

I love your idea of their being "playful" again.  It's so Jim and Pam...so illustrative of the conncection between them.  Just really well done!

 

Summary: A short little drabble set in the early morning light of Jim and Pam's first summer as a couple. Pam reflects on why she enjoys waking up next to one Jim Halpert. :)
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1209 Read Count: 2531 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2010 Updated: August 02, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"...and she grins and catches an inch of skin on his neck between her lips and flicks her tongue until his breathing becomes a little less sleepy and a little more hungry."  

Oh...I really like how you capture their knowing and comfortable intimacy in such seemingly small, yet telling moments and gestures.  Good stuff!



Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! My favorite sort of writing is short little vignettes like this, of little moments that mean more than hours and hours, you know? Thanks again so much for your review!

Apres by callisto Rated: M [Reviews - 80] 39
Summary: Past Featured StoryThis will be a series of one-shots that take place after an episode, in no particular order, for as long as I continue to have ideas.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12593 Read Count: 40644 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2010 Updated: May 09, 2013
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: the fight: so many romantic misunderstandings

Great job Callisto...and such fun.  Sort of like getting a 'producer's cut' that's just chock full of JAMMY goodness! 

Game 5 by Nard Dogg Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Jim and Pam go to a bar to watch the Phillies.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 632 Read Count: 2107 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2010 Updated: October 04, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Congrats on taking your first fanfic plunge...and you must be smiling after last night's game.

Author's Response: Nope, I am a Redds fan. Alas there's always next year.

Mater/Filia by andtheivy Rated: K+ [Reviews - 13] 10
Summary: Pam reflects on one of the more intimate aspects of motherhood while she and Cece share some private time together. "Mater/Filia" is Latin for "Mother/Daughter." That's what this story is about.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1649 Read Count: 2698 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2010 Updated: November 03, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Mater/Filia

Just really, really nice!

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim takes a drive to ask an important question.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2122 Read Count: 2921 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2011 Updated: January 10, 2011
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: January 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

God, I was breaking out in a nervous sweat right along with Jim.  Very true to character.  Nice job!

Nine to Five by yanana Rated: M [Reviews - 12] 9
Summary: We need to fill in some blanks for episode 7.16. And since no one else is taking the reins, I see...
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: One to Ten
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3457 Read Count: 3778 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2011 Updated: February 14, 2011
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I just read this at work...and now, I'm even walking around with a certain kind of "sex-person" smirk on my face...whew! 

Walk This Way by jazzfan Rated: T [Reviews - 15] 18
Summary: The camera crew explores the Halperts' new fitness routine. Spoilers for PDA.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 996 Read Count: 3324 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2011 Updated: February 14, 2011
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Walk This Way

Oh, that just pasted a big ol' smile across my face...well done, my friend....verrrrry well done!

Author's Response: Hey Mr. Bill, I'm tickled I made you smile. Thanks very much.

Summary: Jim Halpert, the producer of a new documentary-style reality TV show, falls for one of the cast members of The Office.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52626 Read Count: 26598 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2011 Updated: May 01, 2011
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Forget about the office

I'm so enjoying this story.  And I like how you are slowly building Jim's and Pam's connection...still tentative, but obviously something there. 

Author's Response: Thanks, Mr Bill! So glad you're reading. Their connection in the next chapter will take a bigger step. I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: March 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Forget about the office

This is such an interesting take on Jim and Pam's "story".  And you've made it completely plausible.  Great fun!

Author's Response: Thanks Mr Bill!

Summary: They are silent. It's like this sometimes.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Let's Spend the Night Together
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 830 Read Count: 3048 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2011 Updated: February 28, 2011
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Arms of a woman

Well, that certainly hit the spot on my lunch hour at work.  Nice...very nice!