Pam and Jim give baby-making a try.
The last two parts posted 10/22.
10 i am absolutely loving this story so far - its such a great mix of tenderness, angst, romance, and heat. great job!
10 that was always my fave part of this episode - where jim was singing about making love and gave pam a look. sneaky snake.
i really like this story, i cant wait to see when we catch up to later episodes. its very interesting to see where she might have been at mentally during these things. :)
Author's Response:
I hope you'll think I do it justice! From here on out, things only get heavier, and I think I'm in tune, but you'll have to let me know :)
Thanks for reading!
Christmas time at Dunder-Mifflin means two things. Romance, and celebrating African-American heritage. A script-based take on the Season 4 Christmas episode.10 this is excellent - the way you have written it and have the characters so spot on, it really does seem like an episode. i can picture every action, beat, smile, and line.
and i was cracking up at the whole andy/jim/the closer part. excellent job, i love this so far.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you can envision the pacing of the lines and the story in general. I can hear and see it, but I'm really happy that is coming through to the reader as well. I'm glad that you liked the Andy/Jim bit, I liked the idea of Andy bragging about something, and then forgetting that Jim knew that he was lying. Thanks for the review waltisafox.
10 "Jim’s voice is suddenly cautious and guarded and Pam can feel the drawbridge leading to the fortress of his heart pull upwards slightly, threatening to leave her stranded on the other side of the moat."
this imagery is gorgeous. excellent writing.
Author's Response: Waltisafox, thanks for such a great review! I'm so pleased you enjoyed the story.
10 i absolutely adored this - well done :) steamy and awesome.
Jim isn't inviting Pam to the Christmas Eve party he and Karen are holding. Three ghosts visit him the night before the big party and try to bring him to his senses. Will he listen to them, or will he convince himself that it is all a figment of his imagination and leave things the way they are?
I guess this is kind of AU?
10 very interesting idea, i love it! more more more :)
Author's Response:
thank you thank you thank you (x hahaa!
i have written the next chapter and i'm going to wait until tomorrow to put it up (:
After a slight pause, Jim rose as well, moving to follow Dwight. Pam stood and shook her head at him.
“Let me go…I owe Dwight one.”
Alternate Scene for Money I couldn't get out of my head. What if Pam went after Dwight? Short, comments would be great.
10 as much as i loved the original scene i would def. not have minded this one one bit :)
Pam wanted to start a Book Club. Jim just wanted to have a gourmet meal.
10 haha yes! i loved this, so great and could totally have happened. the ending was perfect.
What if Jim had finally been stretched to the breaking point before Casino Night?10 oh jim. come to my house, i wont play with your heart!!
hurry and update this please so i can breathe again!! GO AFTER HIM PAM.
Author's Response: Yeah, well, maybe he likes it, too?
What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?
“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.
Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?
10 ahhhhhhh this is amazing! i seriously can picture this in my head so vividly. hurry more more more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I loooove it when people say that they can see it happening. I try so hard to make it visual.
10 this was so cute...perfect amount of fluff to make my weekend end with a smile. :)
Author's Response: Fluff on a Sunday night is good, no? :)
10 this was so cute!! very well written, funny, very in character - excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Yet another story inspired by a song by Ingrid Michaelson called Breakable. I really wanted to tell a story about people being just that -- breakable, and ultimately how grace helps keep us from falling apart. So yeah -- a nice fluffy holiday piece. ;-)10 having almost lost my dad a month ago very unexpectedly, this hit extremely close to home. and now im sitting at work bawling my eyes out - this was such a breath taking story. so well written, so sad, so beautiful. amazing amazing amazing.
Author's Response: Aw, wow...I'm not even sure what to say, but thank you. I'm so sorry that you had to go through that with your dad - but I'm happy he's ok. So glad this story could make you feel grateful for your dad. :-)
A story of loss, love, and inspiration.10 you know its good writing when you forget that this didnt actually happen. you write it so gorgeous, this whole story was absolutely amazing and such a wonderful ride. i can definitely see jim and pam in this future and it makes me so so happy to see it all play out. thank you so much for allowing us all to come along.
Author's Response: Oh, walt! Honestly, I've lost all perspective on this because I've been stuck in this world inside my head (where Jim and Pam are real people living in Buffalo - really!) and to read that you forgot that it didn't really happen is just so gratifying. This world feels like a warm cocoon to me, a place where they could thrive and be really, really happy. I'm so glad you came along for this ride, too. It wouldn't have been any fun driving this bus alone. Thank you so much for your sweet comments and support and I hope I see you next time around!
10 i am obsessed with this and love it so much. more more more!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, so much! It\'s going to be updated quickly....I really appreciate you reading and reviewing!
10 nooooooooooooooooooooooooo dont stop there moreeeeeeeeeeeee!
10 you just made my day with all the new chapters! so so good...i had this pit in my tummy while reading - you do angst very very well. cant wait for more :) [you spoiled me today what can i say]
Author's Response: waltisafox, you just made MY day. :) Thank you so much, I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying this story. I kinda like a pit in my tummy every so often, so I\'m glad you don\'t mind one in yours either! Thanks a million for the review and kind words.
10 so wonderful and i can completely see this happening. cant wait to see what happens at the art show!
Author's Response: It\'s coming soon, waltisafox! I\'m so glad that readers have stayed with this story. Just so grateful and wow...anyway. Thanks so much for the review and the kind words!
What if Jim never went to Stamford? What if Pam started making life changes a little sooner?
An AU look at season 3.
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10 how you take it from angsty to romantic to oh so steamy to funny in one half a chapter is beyond me but you do it beautifully (TWSS)
seriously, loved this so much. and the tassled loafers bit had me laughing out loud.
cant wait for more!
This is the last of my "near miss" rewrites for season three episodes. This one is based on "The Negotiation" and also a Pam talking head from "Michael's Birthday". It's also more angsty than the others.10 "At 10:00 that night, he thinks: I'll go home at 11. At 11:00 he thinks midnight is a reasonable hour. And at midnight he is watching the late shows, staring at the TV, so he pretends that he forgets what time it is. He watches all the late shows, and at 2 AM figures that it's almost the next day, anyway."
this is such an awesome paragraph. i really am enjoying this story even though its making me sad ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, waltisafox! Jim is so mixed up, he doesn\'t know which way is up. **sigh** All he is doing is pretending. I hope you will stay with this story though. Thanks for reading!
10 this is awesome so far. i love the line "So you humored me. Like I was making you macaroni necklaces." so so funny and right on. you capture their voices very well..cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so!
Watching the documentary as a favor for Ryan, Toby learned that almost everyone at Dunder Mifflin could probably sue Michael for something and win big. And he learned a few other very important lessons as well.10 excellent writing and perspective from toby. very real.
its interesting to see how each character would react if faced with the same project. very unique idea and you did great with it.
10 i absolutely love this. the proposal was so realistic - i dont like in a lot of fic how in their proposals its very formal, first middle last name, etc. even while the rest of the story is casual. it doesnt seem very 'them' to me. this was actually one of the only proposals that DID seem realistic. i also loved the view from both houses, the mention of dunder mifflin but not hitting the reader over the head with it - just love love loved it! xoxo
10 wow. such a powerful, moving story. great job, even if it did leave me feeling like jim just broke up with ME. haha.
Jim and Pam have a discussion at Schrute Farm and try to figure out where to sleep.
Spoilers from Money.
10 um omg i had to comment because of your title - hanson por vida! i absolutely love those guys and can recognize a song lyric from them anywhere ;)
oh yeah - and very cute. :) :)