This was dawsome! Very creative, and pitch perfect for Andy. (pun pun)

Author's Response: Thank you! And I like the pun. ;)

Nice little shot of Valium for the anxious Jam fans. LOL Very cute, but I doubt it will be quite this easy for them. We can hope.

This cracked me up, and certainly explained those constantly chapped lips:

Jim licked his lips

Author's Response:

:-) Must. Stop. Thinking. Of. His. Lips. 

Thanks for the kind words Jazzfan!

This is fabulous. I really liked that Jim took the initiative to see if it was possible to make things work for Pam,even though I think she's going to want to come home. I'd love to read more, please continue.

(I so love David Wallace.)

Perfect.

Best line:
"No, he doesn’t know. You have to tell him."
This is the most important part of the Fancy New Beesly. I love how she called him on the hanging up when he got a bad review, too. Jim is making progress in the same areas, but he's a stride behind FNB. I thought you tapped just the right tone - very realistic. May it actually happen.

Author's Response: Hey jazzfan! I like to think there are sometimes those moments where they each realize they have to TELL each other what they are thinking. It seems like mostly they do that (thank God). But I agree, that bugged me when Jim hung up on her and I didn\'t think she\'d believe him. Thanks so much for reviewing! As you know, it means a lot to get feedback. :)

Oh, you totally got me. I was thinking, wow, another Pam met Jim fiction (I should have paid attention to the title), this is nice, and then wham!

I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you!  That was my intention so I'm glad it actually worked.

I was excited to see a new part to this, and I was not disappointed. Definitely worth the wait. Jim's thought process through all this is perfect - his initial honest reaction and then tempering it to do the right thing. It's especially sweet knowing what happens afterward. Another great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a hard time thinking that they\'d be so open to Pam\'s dad coming to stay, so I wanted to portray that decision making (or as you said, thought process), as honestly as possible. I\'m so happy you enjoyed it. :)

This may be my favorite chapter yet and the title is perfect. No serious ambition, and they're happy about it. *laughs*

Author's Response: Thank you...I think that\'s just an inherent characteristic of Pim: that they have ambitions, but not lofty ones, and are okay being...average. Especially Jim. :) Glad you liked it!

Bwahahahahahaahha. (Only thing is, I can't see Pam getting that embarassed over "breaking wind" as Michael calls it.)

My favorite was the comic books - perfect - and priceless. And in order.

Great fun, please keep 'em coming.

Author's Response: Thanks! And after awhile a toot\'s a toot, but that first one - especially if you\'re in bed? - is always a biotch. ;) Glad you liked the comics bit!

Well, guh, what a sweet story, and very believeable. I hope you continue with a series.

This was truly inspired:

"Watching her laugh at an impromptu haiku you emailed her (oh Andrew Bernard/in pink and lime and sky blue/Cornell’s proud peacock), trumps any love poem recitation by far"

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m going to try and continue this. Glad you dug the poetry! :)

Thanks for starting my morning with a big laugh. Hilarious.

Author's Response: You're very, very welcome. We need more laughter in the world, especially in the morning!

This is wonderful. I love the beginning quote too, because I think that's really, really the truth.

After watching the scene this was exactly the kind of mental process I imagined Pam going through. It wasn't actually whether she "liked" the physical attributes of the house, it was everything it meant that Jim did what he did that she loved.

Guh. Awesome job.

Author's Response: Absolutely. I don't think her enthusiasm and near tears at the end had anything at all to do with the actual house itself.  It was just the genuine, amazing gesture of love BEHIND it.  Thanks so much for reading and responding!

Oh this is going to be good, you certainly "know" these characters.

"Question." Jim raised his hand. "Who will you be Michael? Wait. Don't tell me. You're one of the Village People."

This made me laugh out loud.

I loved how Jim was sympathetic to Michael missing Holly, and it made me realize that Pam pretty much missed the whole "Holly" thing.

I'm anxious to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Pam missed it but she'll understand more soon enough.  So glad you're liking it so far!