For the Caught Red Handed and "Nobody knows" Challenges. Sometimes you're so distracted that you get careless and what you think is a big secret isn't such a secret at all. :)
10 Loved this. Everyone was dead on, but I think we learned a lot about Roy from his section. This was such a cute line - "He's just looking back at her - all sappy and googly eyed".
As I always say - Roy's not a bad guy - he's just oblivious. Thanks kaystar!
There are secrets even the closest couples don't share.
10 "When you love someone so much, some things are better left unsaid." - a beautiful, and very truthful, line. Loved this. You said so much with so few words.
10 Wow, what a sweet story. I just love the last line in each paragraph, my favorite being - "Because he is your boyfriend and you’ve never been happier."
Responses to various Five Things prompts. 10 Glad you posted it here too! I just love your series of "Five Things."
Sometimes Pam's a tad insecure. Jim loves her anyway. Extremely mild spoilers/speculation for S3. Nothing like that MySpace debacle. ;)
10 Great story! I especially loved this line - "It won’t change the fact that she’s the one who gets to go home with him at the end of the night.at story! " Yes you do Pam, you lucky girl!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it. And I'm sooooo jealous myself. If I can't be with him though - Pam certainly will. :)
Pam didn't marry Roy but for a while there we weren't quite sure.
10 It's good to laugh to help break up the heartbreak I've been feeling most of the day. Thanks, hugs! (And way to work around the rules and still get the same great outcome!)
Author's Response:
Hell. I'd marry him myself before I have him marry Pam.
That beard is hot. LOL!
10 I loved everything about this! This line was was so innocently hot - "Sometimes when she knows the answer, she'll wait until he figures it out, so his wrist will cross over hers to point out each letter and she can feel his warm skin press to hers." And then the hotness continued through that awesome scene in the dressing room and ending with the dress in the bag. Totally awesome story! Thanks!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading (and reviewing)!
10 I love this exchange:
“Hey. I haven’t heard a yes yet.” He whispers in her ear.
“Hey. I haven’t seen a ring yet.” She shoots back at him.
Jim and Pam are together. They have a fight.
10 Very realistic, reminded me of some of the fights my husband and I have had - especially saying mean things that you know aren't really meant but are said in the heat of the fight. It's a shame that Pam misread his support but I'm glad for the happy ending!
10 Cute story. A nice break from the angst!
Author's Response: Thanks! A little on the far side, but happy endings all around! Although Roy got off easy in my opinion...
What Jam's first moments might have been. Based off a spoiler from the Season 2 DVD.
10 Poor poor Jim. Nice job.
10 I love this 5 things vignettes! I especially loved the last one - not just because of the happy ending but because Thanksgiving makes me feel all warm and happy inside, as does memories of my mother making cinnamon sugar toast when I was little - and also because I think the word gobsmacked is so cute. (is it a real word?) Great story. Anxious to read more from you.
Author's Response: Yeah, I shamelessly stole my mom's cinnamon spread thing to give to Jim's. I'm pretty sure gobsmacked is a real word, although it might just be British slang masquerading as one. Thanks for the review!
Angela and Madge have more in common than they think.10 How sweet! Angela seemed to really have her guard down and acted "normal"!
Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar! I'd love to see some "open" Angela on the show.
Inspired by a certain deleted scene from the Client. 10 This was beautifull and sad and bittersweet all rolled into one. Great job.
Well, the DVDs have given us all a wealth of new inspiration....so here's my being undisciplined and giving in. :o) Right now, I'm planning to cover Jim's talking head in "The Client," the Sasha story, Jim visiting the BB online from the Pochonos, and I'd also like to revisit "The Secret" in light of some of what JK said on the commentary. Squee!
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.10 Gah. You wrote the most heartbreakingly beautiful scene here. The way you turned Jim's emotions into words that could actually be seen in my mind and felt in my heart was unbelievable. I am so glad you are continuing the behind the scenes. You are truly an awesome writer.
10 What a sweet story! I think Sasha needs to hang out with Jim and Pam more often - she seems to bring out some of Pam's real feelings about Jim, and that is a good thing!
10 What a great first meeting - I know this will be getting sad for Jim but I loved his enjoyment at how well the two of them get a long.
Spoilerish for various S2 DVD deleted scenes. Their first date was a date that...wasn't. Eventually though they finally got the hang of it.
10 Awwww, poor Jim. Friends is a great place to start...
Author's Response: Even if they are both just kidding themselves. ;) Thanks kaystar!
10 Loved this chapter, especially this line - "He wishes he was the one to have heard her talk about her dreams before she’d decided to give up on them"
Author's Response:
Sigh. 'Cause you know he does.
10 Nqllisi said the exact same thing I was thinking - but she was more elequent, so I copy her review: It is a testament to what a wonderful writer you are that this only gives me the heebie-jeebies and not the full-body spasms of "ew".
Amazing.
10 I forgot to say - great first fic!! Hope to see more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks, you will see mroie from me, I've gotten the writing bug!
10 I just loved this. Loved Pam's second letter, love that she'd hoped that Jim was still "smoking hot", loved that she had sone so many of the things in the letter, loved that she still had the blue chair, loved that she was with Jim and most importantly, loved that they'd just had a baby.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I love babies...
10 I loved this. First, what a great idea and second, I love that it's Pam who thinks maybe Jim could just hand it to her in 10 years. Go Pam!
Jim and Pam's first date. Fluff ensues.
10 So very sweet. You really have their voices down perfectly!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate it.
12 10 I loved them all but #5 was my favorite.