Penname: belsum Real name: bel
Member Since: November 06, 2006

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Summary:

Pam still doesn't deal well with sudden revelations.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Other, Pam
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141 Read Count: 3495 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2008 Updated: November 18, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HEE! This will never not be funny. Ah Pam. Blindsided by a revelation once again.

Author's Response: You sparked the idea- it did turn out pretty good, though, didn't it? Hee. Thanks so much!

Alive by LoveFool Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 8
Summary: Past Featured Story

Just a little something that the lighting in that last beautiful scene of Business Trip inspired. Some nice, flufftastic jaminess for you to munch on. ;-)

 

Spoilers through Business Trip obviously.

No copyright infringement is intended. 

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 913 Read Count: 6659 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2008 Updated: November 18, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful.

Summary:

“Usually we would frown upon people who engage in biochemical warfare and genocide. In Columbus’ case, we gave him his own holiday and threw him a parade. Go figure.”

The title is pretty self-explanatory. The italics are hypothetical talking heads.


Categories: Other, Present, Past
Characters: Oscar
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 463 Read Count: 1677 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2008 Updated: November 19, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa.  That was so perfectly Oscar.  I love the little background details you managed to slip in.

Summary:

They say the thing that every human being secretly desires more than anything else, is to be known...completely. 

Just some fluffy fluff that I couldn't go to bed without writing. Spoilers through Frame Toby

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood, Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 485 Read Count: 4523 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful.  You completely captured the emotions that we only got hints of across Pam's face.  It really showed her journey of feelings until the end, where she wasn't just lying when she said she loved it.

Summary: Thanksgiving - as only The Office could celebrate it. Extremely mild spoilers for Frame Toby.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3707 Read Count: 8520 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 21, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Thanksgiving

Awww, I love how you ended each chapter with a dollop of Jam fluff.  This was an excellent Thanksgiving!  I can absolutely see Michael changing his mind and also getting too sad about Holly to go through with anything.  All the ensemble voices were spot on, too.

Author's Response: Can't seem to help myself.  There are very very few stories from me where Jam fluff is not a main ingredient. ;)  Thanks so much for the review!

Summary: Past Featured StoryOne part for each season. Pam's p.o.v. Nothing could be more innocent than a freckle, right?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Angela, Karen, Kelly, Mark, Meredith
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5981 Read Count: 27557 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: just this feeling i have

*big goofy grin on my face*

Author's Response: Then my work here is done ;-) Thanks so much, belsum!

Summary:

It’s Christmas Eve (2007), and what are our favorite workers up to?

Drabbles.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Angela/Andy, Creed, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly/Darryl, Kevin, Meredith, Michael/Jan, Oscar, Phyllis, Roy, Ryan, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff, Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1546 Read Count: 28634 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2008 Updated: December 08, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Karen

Yay Karen!  I kind of miss her.  Not the angst from the triangle but just the character.  Glad to know she's doing well, at least in fic-land.

Author's Response:

Oh, Bels, you basically made my day with reviewing. I knew there was a reason I liked you ;).

I enjoy Karen when she isn't screwing up Jim and Pam. I think she is a decent character, and she just deserves more than Greg D and co offered her.

Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Dwight

Gah!  Poor Dwight.  That one hurts.  It's...so Dwight.

Author's Response: Wow, I can sound like Dwight. I don't know whether to be proud or scared.

Summary:

How many times has he called her an angel? Christmas in the Halpert home.


Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325 Read Count: 2923 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: December 10, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh yay!  I just read through all your comments and I'm pleased to know I wasn't the only one in tears.  I think it held up even better after knowing who was actually at the table.  I was able to notice this:

She tilts her head in concentration. It is a familiar gesture, and his heart floods with contentment that warms away the winter chill. As though sensing the change in temperature, she lifts her head and sees him there. She smiles, and it is his smile.

 

Oh!  You meant it was literally his smile!  And the head tilt is familiar because its her mom's!  Niiiiiice.  [/Kevin]



Author's Response: I'm sly, what can I say? Heh. I was pleased that others shared your reaction to this, too! There's just something about the idea that they're going to be able to see each other in their kids- it always stops me short to notice my wee lass doing something that reminds me of her Daddy. Thank you for your beta help and for taking the time to re-read and comment here (you know I love comments!).

Summary:

Something draws her eyes upward (magnetic fields shimmer around her in an endless cloud of positive and negative) and catches the corner of Karen’s mouth, the guarded narrow of her eyes and a shock of heat slams into her chest.

Pam/Karen S3 AU.


Categories: Other, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Karen, Pam, Pam/Other
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Slash, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2589 Read Count: 1802 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: December 19, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really lovely.  I've encountered some Pam/Karen fic before but this was the first time it really felt in character for both of them.  And I liked the Casino Night parallels.

Summary: A new friendship is formed…
Categories: Past, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 863 Read Count: 1592 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: December 21, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Pineapple Incident

Oh how fun to revisit THE classic prank!

Author's Response: The day it started...jello will never be the same.

Summary:

A collection of talking heads from Michael and Holly about each other; from "Goodbye Toby" until "Employee Transfer" (seasons 4-5).


Categories: Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Holly, Michael, Michael/Holly
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 570 Read Count: 2017 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2009
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh!  I love them so much.  Bring back Holly - do you hear me Show?!?!

Summary:

When she draws his portrait at midnight on their two month anniversary, he doesn’t translate into pastels unscathed.

A two point of view retrospective on Jim and Pam. Extended metaphors and positive angst. Title from Tilly and the Wall's "Fell Down the Stairs."


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 440 Read Count: 2047 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: January 11, 2009
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Harsh and beautiful.

Summary: This is how Hunter lost his job to that pretty redhead we saw working for Ryan in S4. Hunter/Kelly.
Categories: Other, Past
Characters: Hunter, Kelly, Kelly/Other
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 459 Read Count: 497 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2009 Updated: February 01, 2009
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

BWAH! That's awesome. I hope Kelly totally had drunken outdoor backstage sex with Hunter.

Summary: “We met at a bar. Can you believe that?”  Written for the Karen - Moving On challenge.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Karen, Other
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Karen - Moving On
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 445 Read Count: 1776 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: April 03, 2009
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it. You're right; it's so much tighter with the new opening and skipping straight to her confrontation with him. And that ending still gives me chills.

Author's Response: It's just twisted that I had to make it shorter. It's a sickness! But I really thought we needed to focus. Heh. Thank you, as always- I was so happy to have something to show you!

Jellybean by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 143] 44
Summary:

Pam writes a letter (or two or three).  We'll see how it goes.

Spoilers for Company Picnic.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11386 Read Count: 33095 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2009
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

5) That was a really weird thing to tell you. I'm never mentioning it again.

17) Really. Don't ever talk to Dwight.

BWAHAHAHahahahahaaaaa!  I love that you switched to Jim's letter for the ending.  We don't need the gory details of the labor and delivery and we don't need real names.  Hell, I still call my daughter Bundle more often than her name and she's five months old!  Anyway, this just makes me look forward to the new season.  Not that I'm wishing away the summer.  But yeah, it'll be nice to see how the show handles it all.  Yay show!

Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hee!  I love that he bought something as utterly ridiculous as a lawn chair.  That's perfect.

Author's Response:

Hee!  We have a couple at my parents for my nieces - they are so cute when they sit in them.

OK - they're just cute. :)

Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh gods, I sucked as a babysitter.

Author's Response: Hee!   Do your kids know that?  LOL!

Summary: Drabbles. 9 times when Pam wished on a dandelion.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Drabble, Fluff, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1047 Read Count: 19699 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2009
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Flying Stars And Flowers

Love the "flying" star.  I can tell you work with kids because that's spot on.

Author's Response: Its one of those"too cute to correct" things. Even if I had Pam correct it in the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Pam takes a nap, and Jim reflects.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 481 Read Count: 3318 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2009 Updated: July 22, 2009
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know, I don't think I've read any other fic takes on Jim's side of the situation.  This really seemed exactly like his reaction.  Excited and flustered and overthinking things and elated and sweet and still snarky and amazed.  They really have come a long way.  Baby.

Author's Response: I'm very pleased that you got that much out of this! I do think that Jim is feeling all of that. It really is amazing to think that the guy pining away for the receptionist behind that big, tall desk (and that big, tall warehouse worker) now has everything he's ever dreamed off. That's the kind of thing that can overwhelm you when you stop to think about it. Thank you, as always, for telling me it was OK to publish this. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

She is his faith, his hope, and his love.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Married, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 710 Read Count: 3368 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: October 07, 2009
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  This was even more poignant on the second read-through.  Still, the "something old" being that note tucked into her garter is what got me yet again.  And then I had to hold back the tears.  How many hours left?

Author's Response: Soon! Oh, thank you. I always love your comments because you have a unique perspective, having seen the work already. Thank you!!!

Summary: What happens if Pam overhears something she shouldn't? An alternate take on "The Secret".
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2628 Read Count: 9519 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: February 15, 2010
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh right!  This story!  I totally remember this opening.  I still love it.  I can absolutely picture the whole thing, Pam freezing, the glee on Kelly's face, Toby anticipating paperwork, Michael's horror in a rare moment of self-awareness.  HEE!

Author's Response: Yep. It seems like a long time ago that I started this story, but it really wasn't! I was encouraged to keep going by your initial reaction- so thank you, as usual!!

Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Pam wondered wildly when her brain had developed a mind of its own.

I love this line!  It's so...Douglas Adams.  This was a great peek into Pam's psyche.  I feel like so many of the fics from this time were from Jim's POV; it's really nice to see Pam going through the turmoil.  It's also completely believable.  I can absolutely buy that the series could have played out like this instead.



Author's Response:

Yay, I liked that line, too. It almost went away with revisions, but I worked until I found a way to make it work.

Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Her brain, which had been whispering messages from her heart all day, abandoned her.

Another perfect line, that.  Oh wow, even knowing your intentions to invert the Casino Night speech it was just...so powerful.  I loved it.  I loved the play on "he loves me, he loves me not" throughout Pam's thoughts.  I loved the vividness of Jim's emotions playing across his face.  I loved Pam's slow realization that it would be worse if Jim didn't love her than if he did.  So fun to revisit this AU when "our" JAM are happily expecting.



Author's Response: You spoil me with your nice comments. You remember how I was so worried that using the CN script would be too cheesy? I'm really glad you told me to go ahead; I think it really did work out nicely. Thank you for pointing out the parts you like the best. That's really cool, and confirms what I already knew- that we think way too much alike! Ha. Thanks, again!

Ancient rhythm by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 6
Summary: Jim finds Pam.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Pregnancy/Babies
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58 Read Count: 2573 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2010 Updated: March 17, 2010
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just love the visual of Jim in the dark using his ears to guide him.  So vivid.  (Which is ironic, considering he's not actually seeing his way down the hall...)

Author's Response: Thank you for your random and spontaneous review.  HA! (Seriously, thank you, as always, for your help. You make me better at this. I appreciate it).