Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.
oh you are too good to us Muggins! Two updates in a day's time? Amazing!! Love, love, love it!! :)
Ham and cheese sandwiches do hit the spot. *sigh* this is just too great to even put into coherent words anymore. You know you're amazing. Simple as that. :)
Author's Response:
*mouth opens* *mouth closes* [nothing to say] *blush*
Pam finally gets pushed over the edge when it comes to Jim and his new girlfriend. Post-Ben Franklin. Yes. Pam needs to do that this week. Seriously.
Author's Response: Fingers crossed!
It all starts at Phyllis' Wedding. Jim and Pam's lives completely change after they've both moved on....to New York City, that is.
I love how you had Jim & Roy connect and instead of having a huge fight, they are understanding and more adult about it. Nice change to what most people do. Please continue soon!!
I like where you're heading with this, please continue!!
I can't tell you how much awesome this story is. I love how they're both changed (for the better) and i just smiled when they met in his office. I also love Jealous Pam ;) She should stake her claim soon! I'm on pins and needles for the central park date!!
He didn’t care how long she needed to stay and didn’t mind if she never left.
awww... that's really cute. I love this story so much, it's ridiculous! keep going please!!!! I like how they're still the same Jim and Pam but they're evolved, more confident and free.
yay for Pam! I'm so glad she just laid one on him.
oh i loved it. great job and the ending is cute. I'd LOVE a sequel if you feel inspired ;)
Wow. I wasn't expecting that. It's definitely a unique perspective and I'd be very sad if it happened in real life.
Good job. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I didnt want to leave it that way because, I am a total JAM fan, so I would really like to see them together too...so, I might more to this...thanks for your review...
10 Yay for Jimpot! Love it ;) My story will be coming your way OH so soon!
Author's Response: Yay!! Can't wait to read it! Thanks so much for your help.
So HEARTBREAKING seriously. But you'll redeem yourself.... yes? :) I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I promise I'll redeem myself :)
When I sat back and looked at what I wrote, I thought, "Oh my god, is this too heartbreaking?" I thought maybe it was just me, but apparently not...
Ah shan!! I love it! Sorry I couldn't read it more in depth earlier, but I love how you interlaced the almost moments into the current. And the ending ;) Wow. I'm anxious for what's to come!! Great job
Author's Response:
Don't worry about it WBJ! You rock hardcore! I was just antsy to get it out because there were rumors that a power outage was coming my way and then I wouldn't be able to post it.
Thanks for the feedback! I owe the ending all to you :)
Love, love, love it!
Fave part: His once more soft and rounded cheek. Her Jim.
Awww. and the cheek-o-meter. Ingenious. We're such hussies.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! And remember, colette is the owner of the cheek-o-meter; I just borrowed it!
Pam deals with her sadness over Jim's relationship with Karen, while Jim tries to figure out why things are so awkward with Pam. And Karen confronts Jim about his feelings. Spoilers through Ben Franklin.
“It’s the old Jim,” she wanted to scream to the office, “he’s back.”
I can't WAIT until all the jammers can scream this out loud at their TVs too. Seriously. It'll be one heck of a night ;) Lovely story!
A proposal. Pure fluff. Two Words: Simply AMAZING!! It's just breathakingly beautiful and awesome. I love your imagery and just cute/adorable moments. Thank you for this!
13 A five things prompt that inspired me. Spoilers up to Traveling Salesmen, to be safe.
Her hand twists so that their palms are touching and she weaves her fingers between his. "I know."
I LOVED this part. Not going to lie. :) So cute and I think I'd be pretty happy going to a hospital if Jim was there ;) haha. Again, nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
this is just so great. I love just the subtleness of it and their inner thoughts too. Awesome job
Author's Response: Thanks WildBerryJam! It's fun to make it all end the way you want it to...
so adorable and hot and just great. yet again amazing!
Author's Response: thanks, hon! Happy Thursday!
I’m not strong Goddamnit, I’m not strong with out you.”
Definitely my favorite line. Please write an epilogue!!
oh my gosh... so sad! please have more!
"My shrine to your forearms is sacred ground.”
That's for sure my favorite line. This is such a great idea for a series and just reading about the forearms makes me giggle like a schoolgirl. Love it!
Author's Response:
I think pam probably does have a secret shrine -but she'll go to her grave before admitting it! ;-)
thanks for the comments!
oh this is so good, but it breaks my heart so much! Especially with the kids and it's just... *sigh* Great job and I hope there's more to come. Even though I do cry while reading it.
Author's Response:
There is probably going to be more to come. I have to force myself to do homework before I type out another chapter though.
I am glad that it is making other people as emotional as it makes me. It is just a really hard subject to write and read, but it is just as much a part of life as happy times, yet, so little is done with tragedies. Angst is covered, but, tragedies, not so much.
Okay, really going to go shut down computer. Must do chemistry and stats. Then I can write.
sooooo good. the forearms, the elevator scene, the ending... oh, just great. lovely job!
Now that he's with Jan, there's so much Michael's learned about love. He feels obligated to spread the word. Set sometime Season 3-ish but not specific.
He can tell she's feeling self-conscious so he leans close and whispers. "Stop worrying. You look beautiful."
I LOVED this line.... ohh I love this story, your Michael is very spot-on and just freakin' hilarious. Lovely job!
Author's Response:
I mean really. This is the problem with Jim and Pam not being together - because he would totally say stuff like that to her!!!
Oh Pam. What you are missing by keeping your feelings to yourself.
SIGH.