That was adorable despite Pam's frustration.  I like them just being a couple that are good working things out together. 

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I think that they are going to be so good together at all the little details of life. Whatever change comes, they'll meet it together.

I really enjoyed the tragic story that is Jim Halpert's love life.  That was mortifying for the most part but very sweet too! :)

Author's Response: Thanks!  I figured a mortifying sexual history might go a ways in making sense of Jim's longtime pining position....Poor boy was baffled by women in general, all he knew was that he really, really liked Pam.  

You guys!  This was really great to get both their thoughts.  In many ways, what they were thinking wasn't all that different, but there were so nervous, they couldn't really figure that out.  That was a great idea for a joint venture.

Author's Response: Thanks MA, I agree, they're coming from similar places of nervous excitement and maybe both feeling a bit overwhelmed.-BL

Author's Response: Thank you Miss MA.   The idea wasn't mine - but I'm glad you liked the result. :) xoxoxo

Great epilogue.  That last line had me giggling.

This is a lovely multifaced story.  It was so funny ("You must be Jim."  Hee.) and sexy and sweet.   Love it.

Wow, what an unsettling chapter for Pam.  You really made me feel for her.  I can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: More is on the way! Thanks for the review!

You picked all the creepiest XF villains, Donnie Pfaster being the scariest of them all.  That was fun.  But I keep imagining Pam in the same situation as Scully and... *shivers*

Awe.  That was just so sweet. Proposing in the snow!  Yes, I will marry you, Jim Halpert. ;)


Author's Response:

She did almost forget to say that part - but can you blame her?  It's 85 degrees here right now, but all I can think of is snow...

Thanks for the review! 

"Of course your children don't usually turn around and decide to become your... dad, suddenly, after almost no experience of being your dad, ever.  And children also don't just decide to leave the family just because one of their... brothers dumps them for one of their sisters.  That's not how it works in a normal family." 

This was awesome!  You were really able to capture Michael's voice. :)  Excellent.

I only I could write like that even when sober! LOL  I really really loved this.  I like the explanation for Marjorie's absence.  And I now need to know what "dolphins boning like hamsters"?  What a code word. LOL


Author's Response:

Boning like Hamsters came from a late night discussion on TWoP about euphemisms for "making love". Treble offered to pay 5 bucks (Schrute Bucks?) to the first person who could write Jim Halpert saying that phrase. I couldn't quite make it work, but slipped it in anyway (it sounded more like a Michaelism anyway).

I can't believe you gave me a ribbon for something I wrote while drunk. This is my proudest moment, ever. Thanks, MA!

I love Creed's wisdom.  This was just so much fun to read. :)

That was a really lovely first fic!  Congratulations.  I like the structure you choose for it, with the repetitions.  It's almost more of a poem than a story.  I hope you continue to post stories.

By the way, I added the challenge tag to it so people can find it when searching for the challenge. :)

Very sweet. :)