No matter how much this couple is perfect for each other, they are bound to have flaws. Jim and Pam head to marriage counseling, and learn to deal with their issues in a semi adult manner.
10 I am so sad this story is about to end. I LOVE it. It is so good. I'm going to start my mourning period now even though I can't wait for the last chapter.
10 Love it, love it, love it
I love me some creepy Creed. However, I can't fathom a world where Creed knows Working Girl. Maybe if there is a porn version or if he worked as a grip on the movie or something. Seeds for your next Creed fic maybe?
Thank you! I picture Creed having just seen it in the past few years, instead of the 80s when it was actually recent. :p
Glad you liked it!
please please tell me you're going 'Old School' with this. I can totally see Dwight kidnapping Bob Vance and stealing cheese puffs from Phyllis' grocery bag.
This is a transcript of The Newlywed Show, taped in December 2009.I LOVE this story. I particularly liked James Brown Michael in this chapter but I loved all of the commercials throughout the story. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks...I gues actually he was imitatig Eddie Murphy imitating James Brown (one of my favorite SNL skits ever)
After a fire destroys her apartment, Pam moves in with Jim and Karen. Everyone has to find out how they define "friendship". Not for those who prefer their Jim to be wholesome.
8 Definately continue. I reread chapter 1 and remeber being very intrigued by the idea of Pam moving into Karim territory. After this chapter I am even more intrigued. I also applaud any attempt at writing a nice, normal, not crazy Karen so good work there.
9 Ugh! I love this story. Well done.
The title pretty much says it all: the fantasies of Jim and Pam and the naughty actings out of those fantasies.
This story will go as long as you, the readers, want it to.
9 This was exactly how I thought part 2 should play out. Nice work. HOT!!
9 Yup. Still eagerly awaiting new chapters. HOT! Sorry I don't have suggestions for you but you seem to be doing quite well on your own. Perhaps, Pam's mechanical friend can make an appearance?
Author's Response:
I have a healthy amount of ideas for future chapters. The only problem is that some of those ideas are just...very basic ideas. Getting around to actually writing them is a whole 'nother feat. :)
And I do believe (as lisahoo commented below you) that Pam's little mechanical friend WILL be making an appearance. ;)
Yeah, this was a little different. I'll be interested to see part 2. It was just so much more awkward because it's a little taboo especially with the Michael incident in the beginning. I think they need more communication to diffuse the awkwardness. Then, of course, a payoff at the end evil one. Seriously, I'm glad there will be a part 2 because you completely left me hanging there.
10 WOW! That was something. One of my coworkers still carries a pager and I swear I will have a sly little smirk every time I see it today.
10 Yeah, I'm going to have an issue with those ties in the future, too. That's a hard question, this one or the pager. Both worked for me if you know what I mean. Awesome Job (in every sense of the word).
Author's Response: Well as long as they both worked. ;) Haha! Glad that you enjoyed it!
10 oh. why you would even question whether or not you should add more is beyond me. Definately more. Soon. awesome!
ditto what a previous reviewer said about the office Michael/Jim office scene. You're fingers to TPTB's ears.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Jim has loved Pam for so long, and has had enough heartbreak. There is only one thing he can do—have his memories erased of her. Inspired by the movie Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind. Slightly spoilerish for season 3, and definite spoilers for Booze Cruise, Casino Night and any other season 2 episode.
Love the last line. It made the story for me. Good work.
I needed some cheering up, so in that vein, here is an incredibly un-angsty little piece of fluff. It's only three parts long and it's almost all done.
Pam and Jim reconnect in the most unlikely of all places...
This totally brightened my day. I bestow upon you the Fine Work award! Speech, speech.
8 DAMMIT JIM! Well written. I think you've got a good handle on Jim's inner thoughts. While I'm not a Karim fan, I could totally buy this scenario. Nice job!
9 I can see how this would be difficult to write. I cheered when Jim admitted he was an ass. I frowned when he said they should just be friends. Anyway, nice job.
Michael's Farewell Party turns into an unexpected night for Jim and Pam.
9 Cool idea. I love it when they're trapped together. What horribly inappropriate thing will Michael do at the party? Was Karen only faking sleep in the backseat? Looking forward to the next chapter.
9 'Michael's room' genius. Well I've been with this story from the beginning and I'm totally involved. This chapter was a little sad. I'm sure it'll take an upswing from here, right? Please say yes.
"Why do you want this job?"
His mind is suddenly blank.
"Um..."
Beach Games aftermath, so spoilers for Beach Games, and speculation for the finale. Jammy, obviously.
8 Nice. I vote oneshot. Maybe see what happens thursday.
Ryan Howard didn't always live by the philosophy that in order to attract women you needed to basically ignore them.
Ok so I'm not a huge slash fan, BUT I do own a power pad and I would totally watch "Tramp Stamp Murder" so I'll give it two thumbs up. PS I think you need to work a framed Asia poster into your next chapter title.
Author's Response: Ahahaha, I saw you make a spinach dip and a loaf of sourdough bread once! Power pads are amazing, btw. I'm glad that you liked it even if you aren't big on the slash! Thanks so much :)
An inevitable conversation following Beach Games.
8 Pam-tini's all around! The only constr. crit I offer is that I can't see Phyllis saying 'reamed'. I loved the Karen part of this story and can't wait for more. good job.
It took me a minute to figure out what was wrong with Andy. Then I started laughing. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working under the assumption that they just don't care about him enough to rescue him as he floats out to sea... er... lake...
If I didn't already have a screen name I'm pretty sure I'd go with Shame Stool. Sadly as a said grossed out reader from this story, I can think of at least 5 or 6 horrible ways to interpret that screen name. This was so much funnier than I could have possibly anticipated.
Author's Response: yeah, when you are dealing with Bad! fic, suddenly everything can be really, really gross.