Love the ending!

REALLY good story.

First time I heard Arrtard was on South Park... nice SP referance!

Author's Response: I\'m a huge South Park fan as well, I\'m glad you caught it!

I'm still reading but have got tosay I love it so far. In a story as structured as this one the details of how they spent their night together really have no place. So I just had to say great story and good decision to leave out the first night smut. Really isnt it a little bit hotter that way anyway?

Author's Response: Thank you!! I\'m glad you support my choice to leave the first night smut out. I don\'t write particularly good smut anyway (I get too embarrassed), so it\'s probably just better if people make up their own ideas about what happened that night. ;) Hope you enjoy the rest of it!!

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registerd an account here just so I could leave this review.

This is by far and away the most well written fanfic I've read yet. I finished the whole thing in one night! You've obviously got mad skills since my new favorite Jim/Pam fanfic dosent even have that much Pam. You made an entirly original character totally engrosing, and got me to forget the sadness of Jim/Pam not being together since I was too buisy rooting for he & Emily to work out. And amazing at the end I was even wishing for Jim to not go back to Pam. WOW, never figured Id be thinking that. Did you mean for the tables to be turned on the reader like that?

Madd props, GREAT story!!!

Author's Response: Wow, I\'m so sorry it\'s taken me so long to respond (especially to such a great review!). Thank you so much for your wonderful comments -- I\'m glad you liked this story (and Emily). It\'s hard for some people to imagine Jim and Pam not together, but I think there is more than just one person for each of us, and this story was an attempt to show that. As for the end ... I was hoping that people would like Emily enough to be happy with HER happy ending (and Jim\'s, of course). I\'m working on Pam\'s side of this story (New York Pam) and, although it\'s slow going, she\'ll have her chance at a happy ending, too.\r\n\r\nAnyway, thanks so much for registering just to review -- that is so nice! Glad you liked this fic (believe me -- not everyone did!). ;-)

This cracked me up. Nice.

More to come huh?

I remember Dave Burba from when he was with the Cincinnati Reds. I find it ironic that I read this today since he was on the last Reds team to reach the post season until this year. (15 years)

Good stuff there. I would really like more. Nice balance between description & dialogue. Its a great topic that I'm sad fewer people have used. Hopefully your great use of it will inspire others to use it as well.

This is really good. I think you portray Pam really really well. Please keep updating!

When are you all going to get together and start doing one of these for this season!? Soon I hope.

you've done this perfectly so far. If Pam remembered everything already it'd be too soon, and if it was all fluff it wouldnt make any sence. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for assuring me that I\'m taking the right pace here. I always worry that maybe Pam needs to remember things sooner... and she will, but the idea here is her falling in love with Jim. And I\'m glad I\'m not boring everyone. Thank you so much for the input, I appreciated!