Penname: time4moxie Real name: Moxie
Member Since: September 21, 2006

Bio:

 

Writer. Stalker. Hussy.  Not necessarily in that order. 

Reviews are like crack, without the degenerative physical manifestations.

Author of the Month: April 2018  


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I Feel So Far From Where I've Been by Willow Rated: MA [Reviews - 16] 7
Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is my take on Pam's motivation for leaving the wedding with Roy. Only Pam and Roy are in this story, but I am very much in the Jim/Pam camp so it is safe for JAM fans too. I know I have been absent for awhile. This episode pushed me out of hibernation.
Categories: Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1287 Read Count: 2639 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2007 Updated: February 10, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: I Feel So Far From Where I've Been

ah, it's so hard to read this.  I just want to shout a big NOOOOOOOO!!!!  But you did it well.  Don't suppose you are going to write the first Pam/Jim meeting after this horrible mistake??  Please??

Author's Response: Thank you Moxie!  I don't know if I will continue this.  I just had to get Pam's thoughts out of my head.

Not with a Bang, with a Whimper by Maybe Once Rated: T [Reviews - 45] 13
Summary: It's all about becoming the Fancy New Beesley, really it is. A series of short-ish pieces running from "Business School" to "Cocktails,"  this story was started right after Phyllis' Wedding as a speculation and flight of fancy based on available spoilers for those episodes.  As you can see, things didn't quite turn out the way I'd planned.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Roy
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9123 Read Count: 45518 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2007 Updated: June 22, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: He Receives the Gift He Did Not Give.

I really, really like this!!  Just as it should be between them!


Author's Response: Oooh, look at this, I can respond to comments!   Thanks, Moxie!   I'm glad you like it!  More to come...

Blood by HereComesTreble Rated: T [Reviews - 13] 10
Summary: What I'd like to happen on valentines day.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3104 Read Count: 3412 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2007 Updated: February 10, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Why Pam is so much better than Karen

Very nice,  And different!  Great job!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: March 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Why Pam is so much better than Karen

I re-read this because I needed some distraction from my frustration over my chapter 5 woes.  I had forgotten how sweet this was.  You really need to write more, Sensei.  :-)

Is a handful out of 10 good?  I suspect I have smaller hands than you so I'll say a halful and half out of 10.

 

It's your heart, not mine, that's scarred by purplebelt Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 8
Summary: Ryan snaps at Jim in the break room.

Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Ryan
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 659 Read Count: 3402 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2007 Updated: February 11, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: It's your heart, not mine, that's scarred

You know, after Ryan blew off Jim's prank in The Return, I could TOTALLY see him saying this to Jim. And how awesome would that be?  Great work!!

Watching for Fireworks by Pseudonym Rated: T [Reviews - 28] 9
Summary: A few days after Phyllis's wedding, Pam confronts Jim on the roof. Spoilers up to Phyllis's Wedding.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6106 Read Count: 25291 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2007 Updated: February 14, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Jim

I'm loving all of this - am I right that there's at least one more chapter????  Great Job on the characters.


Author's Response:

There will be exactly one more chapter, and it's proving to be sort of difficult to write-- but it will get done in the next couple of days. I promise!

Roses by NeverEnoughJam Rated: K+ [Reviews - 34] 24
Summary: Past Featured StoryThere's a reason Meredith gets drunk on Valentine's Day, and it's not the obvious one. Spoilers through "Phyllis' Wedding".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Meredith
Genres: Holiday, Inner Monologue
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1696 Read Count: 3223 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2007 Updated: February 12, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Roses

very sad.  but very, very good!!!


Author's Response: Thanks, Moxie! I'm very glad you liked it.

something rough and unfinished by allibabab Rated: T [Reviews - 23] 9
Summary:

Her voice is so quiet that she's not sure he hears her, but then he's sighing and saying, "Yeah," like it's something he's been waiting to hear.

[Post Phyllis' Wedding]


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2112 Read Count: 3746 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2007 Updated: February 13, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very, very sweet.  :-)


Author's Response: Thank you! :)

The Big Reveal by nqllisi Rated: K+ [Reviews - 27] 15
Summary: Past Featured Story

Pam spills her secret, but Karen is listening.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 737 Read Count: 3740 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2007 Updated: February 15, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Why you shouldn't eavesdrop

oh, you are so evil at twists like that!!!  (and by evil I mean very, very good!!)  :-)

Whatever it takes to get Karen out of the picture.... ;-) 



Author's Response: I do love the occasional twist ending. Hee. Bye, Karen! (Thank you!!)

Changes in Definition by lostfox555 Rated: M [Reviews - 78] 10
Summary: Jim and Pam redefine some things they thought they knew as they find their way to one another. Spoilers through The Return.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42984 Read Count: 69784 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2007 Updated: May 19, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9
Date: February 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Painful

I really love the theme you put on each chapter.  Nice touch!!

Five Things That Changed After Dwight Caught the Bat by sharky Rated: K+ [Reviews - 17] 7
Summary: Who knew a bat could drastically change things in the office? Post-Business School.
Categories: Other, Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1483 Read Count: 2844 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2007 Updated: February 18, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Bat

oooh!  These were so good!!  And I'm SO looking forward to the desk change and when Jim notices the painting.  Because, you know, he just has to!!


Author's Response: Of course he has to...and while the cameras are there. Thanks for the review!

DMV by dylan619xf Rated: K [Reviews - 13] 6
Summary: Pam goes to the DMV.

Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 375 Read Count: 3090 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2007 Updated: February 18, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: February 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: DMV

very sweet!  :-)

Breakthrough by shan21 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 28] 20
Summary:

Jim and Pam fight. Pam finally has her breakthrough.

Spoilers through Business School


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3712 Read Count: 6573 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2007 Updated: February 18, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very nice!


Author's Response: Thankee! Getting reviews from you is like being told "Hey, nice bike riding!" by Lance Armstrong.

Spin by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 18] 7
Summary: How Jim knew that Pam was a "dorky dancer".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Challenges: Dancing Pam
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 463 Read Count: 3012 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2007 Updated: February 19, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awww - I can just see this scene so vividly.  Just another glance into the world of two people who really belong together.  Thanks for jumping in with this!!!!   You make me want to believe things will really work out.

Author's Response:

You know, I thought about making this more complex- adding foreshadowing or some more angst or something, but I thought- no. He watched her dance and he loves her so he thought it was cute. They are perfect for one another, and it will work out. Keep hope alive, Moxie! (And thank you, as  usual!).

Coffee, Tea, or Something Else Entirely by Par5 Rated: K [Reviews - 11] 4
Summary: Sometimes Pam tries something new but she always finds comfort in the familiar. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 562 Read Count: 3160 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2007 Updated: February 20, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh you angsty woman - what is it about you that keeps me hanging around??  You taunt us with the truth and the chance of something sweet, and the pull the rug out from underneath us!  Tease!  (But really, nice work.  Even if it does BREAK. MY. HEART.!!!!!)

Author's Response: I am Angsty Annie to your Fluffy Felicia; yin to your yang. We go together like peanut butter and chocolate. You can't always have the happy ending you know! But thanks for reading even though I broke your heart!

And we'll sleep in the ocean. by unfold Rated: T [Reviews - 16] 11
Summary: She's always been his escape and now he gets to be hers. Set sometime in the middle of season two.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 909 Read Count: 4499 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2007 Updated: February 20, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have no idea where they are going, but I am glad they are.  Thanks for the little break in the angst!!!

Chiaroscuro by NeverEnoughJam Rated: K [Reviews - 21] 11
Summary: Pam sees her relationship with Jim through an artist's eye. Spoilers through "Business School".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Model
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1591 Read Count: 3499 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2007 Updated: February 20, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chiaroscuro

Just beautiful, nej - really!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Moxie! High praise from you!

Humming Songs To A Girl in the Yellow Dress by WildBerryJam Rated: K [Reviews - 19] 9
Summary: It’s the first day she’s ever worn a dress to work, but somehow the change feels nice.
Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 874 Read Count: 2957 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2007 Updated: February 20, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Anyone who references a Monkees song already is a star in my book!!!  Add to that the fact that this story was really sweet!  Nice Job!

What's next?  A Michael Scott interpretation of Salesman?? 



Author's Response: Thanks loads for that. Randy Scouse git is my favorite song. Its good to know other people know the monkees... :)

When All is Said and Done by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 11] 5
Summary: Past Featured Story

Improv!Fic - Started by ObsessionInc - Prompts by GreenFish.  Someone has made a big change in her life and she's actually OK with it.


Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Michael/Jan
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 420 Read Count: 2984 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2007 Updated: February 22, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: When All is Said and Done

I think you said SO much in less than 500 words!  Here's to Jan and Michaels chaotic but working happiness :-)


Author's Response: Thanks Mox.  It came surprisingly easy - I was shocked!!  I'm really enjoying writing about these two.  The comic possibilities are endless.

We Become Abstract Art by PuffingNoise Rated: M [Reviews - 9] 7
Summary: Pam does create honest art...and she gets the courage to show it to Jim.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 747 Read Count: 2649 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2007 Updated: February 22, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really, really good - I wish I was as skilled at leaving more to the imagination like this is.

 

Great job! 



Author's Response: Thank so much!

A Message by Peskipiksi Rated: T [Reviews - 28] 18
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam calls Jim to warn him about Roy.  Takes place immediately after Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1172 Read Count: 6941 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Warning

Oh, would he just tell her to shut the frack up? (Karen, I mean!) Tell me he drops Karen off and shows up at Pam's door - because that's what I'm going to believe....

Great phone conversation!! 

Hiatus by Maybe Once Rated: MA [Reviews - 30] 21
Summary:

Just like you know will happen, Jim and Pam get together right before a long hiatus. Here is how it all plays out in my happy head. Happy and saucy-- this one starts off all squeaky clean, but quickly earns a "Whorish!" from Angela and a "Niiiiice" from Kevin.  


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7608 Read Count: 44193 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: March 05, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Off Camera: Jim

very nice - and who doesn't love a good (bad?) Kung Fu movie???

Author's Response: I think that by definition a good Kung Fu movie *IS* a bad Kung Fu movie....It's delicious awfulness is what makes it so entertaining. 

Elsewhere by girl7 Rated: MA [Reviews - 195] 59
Summary:

Jim's basketball game with the C.F.O. (not his actual initials) gets interrupted with news from what happened at Poor Richard's; he reacts accordingly.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31449 Read Count: 115858 ePub Downloads: 34
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: March 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I simply have NO idea how Pam could let him walk out that door without a few more hours of 'togetherness'.  Seriously.  Karen or no Karen.  But then again, maybe that's why Colette is certain I'm satan.  ;-)  So well written dear, it really gets me in that area where my heart is supposed to be.  :-D

Author's Response:

Amen to that, sister!  And if you are Satan, then...well, I'll sell you my soul if you promise never to end Squirrel.  :o) That story is so freaking brilliant - have read the lastest chapters but haven't reviewed because I've been thinking about just why it works so well, and I wanted to be able to articulate it semi-coherently.  So look for a long review from me in the next few days, when I get a chance to catch up.

Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: February 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'd love to see the song list! I hope you have the next chapter up and ready soon - I'm chomping at the bit to see what happens next!!

Author's Response:

My dear Moxie, while your reviews are doubly important to me (because I am such a fan of your stuff), I urge you to stop reviewing and post an update to Distance Learning instead.  Seriously, that fic has the history, depth, and length to restore order to the universe that G. Daniels has so callously disrupted.  Really - when are you posting an update?

Thanks for the review - as a fellow writer, I'm sure you know how important reviews are, and given the rate at which you write and post (which is nothing short of awe-inspiring - such productivity and so consistently good), I can imagine that it's a bit of a sacrifice for you to take the time to review.  (I find myself constantly struggling - to read and review, or read and then write my own stuff? It's such a tough call.)

Anyway - thank you so much, for both the review and your awesome work.



Author's Response: ETA: I'll post the song list at the end of the next chapter --

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: March 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, I would argue that this Karen is just as captivating- I mean, at least Jim is finding it truly hard to break it to her! In Squirrel he'll feel a bit more relieved!  (But then again, I marked my story as AU, so I guess I was allowed to make Karen a bit harder than perhaps she's really meant to be....)

Either way, I was delighted to see a new chapter. Looking forward to the final two!!!! 



Author's Response:

Well in Squirrel, I woudln't have a problem with Jim dumping her all coldy - a la Katy.  And I'm not sure your Karen is that much AU, based on some of the deleted scenes.  Almost ripping down that flier?  Eeeeeee.

Thanks again for reviewing!