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Charcoal and Watercolors by I Know This Much Is True Rated: T [Reviews - 229] 62
Summary: Past Featured Story

MEMBER'S CHOICE - An alternate universe where Pam and Roy had a wedding, Pam goes to art school in New York, Dwight owns a restaurant and Jim works for a job in advertising that he likes a lot more and gets a lot more money at.
Basically? Dunder Mifflin never exists. And everyone meets under different circumstances.

The characters are pretty much the same -- personality-wise -- they just have different roles and work different jobs.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Pam, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67523 Read Count: 167995 ePub Downloads: 22
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2007 Updated: June 15, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Waking Up and Starting Over: Decisive Action

making me miserably unemployed right now

Hi, are you me? I'm dealing with the same thing only I also have writer's block, so...yeah. I'm reading a lot of Jammy goodness to make it better. :) I'm really enjoying what you have so far. While I love all the post-finale stuff I've been reading, this is a very nice and welcome change of pace.

 

I agree that a good AU job would be advertising. It seems like a good profession for Jim and Michael to use their creativity (Michael almost needs a job like that) and Ryan could be an exec with either the company they work for, or one of their major clients. It would play to his business abilities and not necessarily require him to be creative, which I don't see as one of his strengths. All he would have to do is approve Michael and Jim's ideas.



Author's Response:

Well, I don't *think* that you're me...haha, kidding. :) But I was seriously so happy when I came up with the idea for this story. I kept thinking, "YES! Something to write!". I have such a hard time writing post-finale stuff because I guess I like to have an idea of what's going to happen next before making up my own ideas. (That sounds really weird, but I swear that's pretty much dead on what I think)

Thank you for your detailed suggestions! I will certainly take it into consideration. :) 

Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 27: This Is The Life I Want: Meet Me At Strawberry Fields

I don't think it would be possible to dislike whatever ending this story has. Of course I don't want it to end, but what can you do?

Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 26: This Is The Life I Want: Paris

Ok, I really enjoyed that chapter and I'm very excited for the next one, but what I really want to comment on are those pictures. They are amazing and are making me jealous, since I have always wanted to go to Paris. Especially the Pere Lachaise ones. I've always had a thing for old cemeteries. It's weird, but I love them.

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Date: June 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions

Have I mentioned how much I am enjoying this story? Because it's quite a bit.

Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 25: This Is The Life I Want: The Graduation Gift

Every time I come here and this story is updated, I get just a little bit happier. :)

His Precious Cheeseburger by McGigi Rated: K [Reviews - 7] 6
Summary:

Sometimes a cheeseburger is worth waiting for. Based on "His Cheeseburger" over at YouTube.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99 Read Count: 2069 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2007 Updated: June 01, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: His Precious Cheeseburger

You have no idea how happy this has made me. I have been singing that song to myself for a week - ever since I saw that video. I love it.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I love the song and the vid, and this was its lovechild. Thanks for the review!

to touch with the lips by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 22] 6
Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim and Pam’s four First Kisses…and first Last Kiss.  Spoilers through "The Job," unspoiled spec thereafter.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 313 Read Count: 3595 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2007 Updated: June 04, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: like a river finally reaching the ocean

It's so short, but so good! That last part almost made me cry. You conveyed so much in so few words. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm economical, apparently (also, I write fic at work...I don't have time to write epics! Hee). Thanks again.

Five Ways Jim Halpert Proves He's Really, Really Back by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 100] 34
Summary: In the week following their first date, Jim's true colors start reappearing....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10089 Read Count: 38080 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2007 Updated: June 13, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Monday

I really like this story. I especially liked that part about Karen hitting Jim with the box on her way out. That was pretty funny.

Four Dunder Mifflin Employees Who Find Out They're Pregnant... And One Who Doesn't by ExtremelyGruntled Rated: K+ [Reviews - 55] 17
Summary: Past Featured StoryOur favorite Dunder Mifflin women find out some big news.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Angela, Jan, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael/Jan, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5052 Read Count: 22495 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2007 Updated: June 05, 2007
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Date: June 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Pam

I've got a big dopey grin on my face now, thanks to you. Loved the story, so glad it was Karen who wasn't pregnant. I mean, I had an actual moment of fear at the thought.

Loved despite of great faults by downtown Rated: T [Reviews - 22] 9
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam hates weddings (and organza).

Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight/Angela, Ensemble
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3799 Read Count: 3484 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2007 Updated: June 06, 2007
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Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Maid of Honor

Just lovely.

Author's Response: you are too kind. thanks for the response!

Back to the Beginning by susanita Rated: M [Reviews - 73] 40
Summary: A first date, and a second chance for two people who never got much of a first chance.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13580 Read Count: 30834 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2007 Updated: July 16, 2007
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Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Hey, It's Good To Be Back Home Again

Fantastic first attempt! I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-) 

For what I am when I am with you... by Stablergirl Rated: M [Reviews - 253] 108
Summary: Past Featured Story

“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly.  Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33558 Read Count: 126482 ePub Downloads: 51
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2007 Updated: July 24, 2007
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Date: September 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Stories and Pam

I am completely enamored of this story. And of Mark. As much a fan as I am of Jim and Pam, I loved Mark in this story. Nice representation.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love Mark too ;-)

A Boy and His Guitar by I Know This Much Is True Rated: M [Reviews - 29] 7
Summary:

"So did I tell you that I play guitar?" -- Jim

Jim has a hidden talent. He knows how to play the guitar, and he uses it to his advantage.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Karen, Katy, Mark, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12087 Read Count: 17295 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2007 Updated: June 25, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: How Jim Decided on the Guitar

I love what you have so far. I've been staying away because I'm trying not to read unfinished stories, but the idea of Jim with a guitar was just too tempting. You did not disappoint!



Author's Response: I understand the desire to avoid reading something that isn't yet completed. But I usually tend to update super quickly. :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

What Might Have Happened by MoreLikeSwaying Rated: K [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

As my immensely creative title suggests, this is about what might have happened directly following Casino Night, from Pam's perspective.

Spoilers from "Casino Night", some tiny spoilerettes from other season 2 episodes.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1109 Read Count: 1433 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2007 Updated: June 20, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Happened

I think just justice has been served. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Save the Receptionist, Save the World by shan21 Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 3
Summary:

"Once we had finished the season, we knew.  We had the ultimate prank," Pam said breathlessly.

"A way to make Dwight Schrute believe that his world had been turned upside down, that superpowers really do exist, and that Dunder-Mifflin was hiding a secret so huge that it would stop at nothing to keep it hidden.”


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1272 Read Count: 2526 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2007 Updated: June 20, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: June 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Setup

I'm really enjoying this. I think you captured the Jim/Pam dynamic perfectly. Very realistic. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks Smurfette! I always try to keep things realistic. This story is about to get wacky, but hopefully it'll still be believable :)

They Say You Never Really Know Someone... by LoveFool Rated: T [Reviews - 130] 60
Summary: Past Featured Story

This will just be a series of short vignettes about Jim and Pam getting to know one another as they start their adventure into true coupledom. Embarrassing moments, phobias, guilty pleasures....the truth comes out.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8782 Read Count: 69335 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2008
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Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Strange Bedfellows

I love what you have so far. It seems very natural and the dialogue is very true to the characters. I especially liked that monkies thing. I was cracking up for a full minute, seriously. Even now, I'm still laughing.

It's All Happening So Fast by bitterpill Rated: T [Reviews - 19] 11
Summary:

Pam's fears are getting the better of her.

For the Pam's Pregnancy challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 856 Read Count: 5954 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2007 Updated: September 09, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Too cute. It was a great moment and I think you captured them both perfectly.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm so glad it worked for you.  Appreciate it:)

Butterfly by NeverEnoughJam Rated: T [Reviews - 15] 10
Summary: Fluffy enough to stuff pillows with. Jim thinks about the changes he and Pam are going through. Absolutely no angst.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 919 Read Count: 3954 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2007 Updated: September 10, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: September 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Butterfly

*sigh* Just lovely. Fluff is just never a bad thing.

Author's Response: Thanks! Just a little something to tide us over...glad you liked it!

Playing Catch-Up by McGigi Rated: K+ [Reviews - 73] 38
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam wishes she had loved Jim all her life, and Jim rises to the challenge. Pure fluff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Childhood, Fluff, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10255 Read Count: 21402 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2007 Updated: September 19, 2007
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Date: September 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Awkward Years

I absolutely love this story. And yes. Grunge does rock.

Author's Response: thank you so much! I miss the grungey junior high years, sort of.

Screwed by wonder149 Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 4
Summary:

How Ryan Howard learned that timing is everything.
(two TalkingHeads, Post The Job)


Categories: Present
Characters: Kelly, Ryan
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Kelly's Revenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119 Read Count: 2212 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2007 Updated: September 17, 2007
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Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful! I love vengeful Kelly.

Not So Great by thirtypercent Rated: T [Reviews - 17] 12
Summary: A scene that I imagine could have taken place after Email Surveillance. Pam helps Jim clean up after his party, and waxes poetic about the appearance of beer bottles. Some angst.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Oneshot
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1067 Read Count: 3124 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2007 Updated: September 19, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Beer Bottles and Living Room Floors

Excellent first attempt! Your protrayal of drunk!Pam seemed very realistic.

Magic in the Sky by wonder149 Rated: T [Reviews - 7] 3
Summary:


Post The Job, Pam and Jim's first date.
...A BadFic response.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 391 Read Count: 2941 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2007 Updated: September 21, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was one of the best bad fics I've ever read. Subtle,. yet, at times, charming. Nice.

Also, hilarious.

Caught by scrantonbranch Rated: K+ [Reviews - 9] 3
Summary:

Jim and Pam’s secret is out. Pure fluff.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1004 Read Count: 3199 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2007 Updated: September 22, 2007
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute and sweet.

A Woman Waits for Me by Kestrel Rated: K+ [Reviews - 107] 41
Summary: Fluff + Jam = Happiness. Just little phone conversations I could imagine Jim and Pam having. Spoilers through the S5.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14239 Read Count: 49486 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2009
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: October 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Wait for the season to come back to me

I am just finding this story now and I don't ever read WIPs because 1) I know how long I take to update and 2) patience is not my main virture, but I thought this story looked good, and now I'm hooked, so I am here to beg you - BEG YOU - to update soon. Please and thank you. :)

Author's Response: Yay! You don\'t know what an ego boost it was to read your review! I\'ll try my best to update as soon as I can! (Or at least, as soon as I get some more material). Thanks for the review!

Somewhat Of A Thing by Recorderalways Rated: T [Reviews - 8] 6
Summary: A little Sunday fluffy thing. Spoilers for Season Five Premiere, "Weight Loss".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1885 Read Count: 3507 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was just lovely. I think I am going to have to read it over and over.